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Ayelet | It's The End Of Me I feel I exist In a very deep sense As if I were water Under the sink And this pain Couldn't be Oblivious of me Again. People under control Reduce thinking to shreds Pieces of agony Little stones on your heart Very delicate So alone Centered in emotion Calling you names Grasping a truth so flimsy So am I Resting between your arms Vulnerable as hell |
mirage29 | Your vulnerability... is Beautiful. Are you upset, Ayelet?? ------------- Virtually holding-space with you here--, holding you snug and safe, and soothing you, .. just rock you for a while. (music) We Will Rock You (Sally Harmon, instrumental music, lullaby) [2:53] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Oz6_jt5XqE Rest, and feel Comfort remaining with you. lit a candle ... *~~~~~~~~~ Are you celebrating the New Year where you are? "May you have a Good and Sweet new year.” Stay Safe Sounds like inner-work. Good solid strong inner-work. 'Little stones on the heart' I know that this is a Jewish holiday. Part of it has to do with sorrow for sins, and making atonement? Sometimes people tend to be too hard on themselves, Ayelet. |
Ayelet | Thanks dear. I am celebrating, and getting renewed inside out. Shana tova |
mirage29 | Oh, wonderful... May it be a Good one for you. Power, & Blessings. Have a good (and sacred) holiday. Shana tova |
Pearlty | The ending was like pow!! on this ayelet, and so true on vulnerability.. I can relate. : |
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mirage29 | Ayelet .. you leave images and lines that are quite haunting. They follow me for a really long time. Your various works (over the time you've been here) pop back into my head from time to time. 'Little stones' ….
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Ayelet | Thank you Mirage, I'm glad I can share. |
Randall | I can relate. I don't miss that vulnerability. |
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Randall | I take it back. Maybe I do. |
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Randall | Every Stripe needs his Yellow. |
Ayelet | It can make you feel alive. |
mirage29 | (music) Love is Like A Butterfly (Dolly Parton) [2:21] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ywFx-nGZXxI Randall's "Stripe and Yellow" Story REF - http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum15/HTML/004195.html
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thequeen | "People under control Reduce thinking to shreds Pieces of agony"Lately I have trying to weigh where do I stand in terms of my depth. Have I lost the spark or is there too much rationalising on my part? This verse of yours makes you the master especially with these few lines. Are you the teacher, how do you know? Shredded thoughts, agonising life? Is there a message you are trying to convey? Lol, these are too many questions Thank you for sharing your precious work with us |
Ayelet | Thank you thequeen I don't usually like to interpret. It's what it is. It's what Came to me. |
thequeen | quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Thank you thequeen I don't usually like to interpret. It's what it is. It's what Came to me.
Indeed! Thanks
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